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Jennie fills her friends in.
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Comment from
Pamusart
Hi. This is a good entry for the contest. Good luck in that.
Here " Her decision may come with something"
I did not see any decision coming up with something. It confused me. Maybe come UP with something That affects your word count though.
I counted and recounted the number of words and it is indeed one hundred words.
Ahh.
" Her decision may come up shortly.
Do you like that.?
Anyhoo. Well done!! Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
It is changed. Thank you for your help and review!
Comment from
LJbutterfly
You have written a very nice short story for the Flash Fiction contest. Jennie keeps her secret throughout the story, leaving her friends in suspense. Finally, in the surprise ending, she reveals her secret. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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