Fish, Interrupted
Big plans but he was a...4 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
a cute poem. The fish is cute with the bowtie. It is a clever poem. I like the ending. Good luck in the contest. Very good poem. The bear ruined his plans, ha ha
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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a cute poem. The fish is cute with the bowtie. It is a clever poem. I like the ending. Good luck in the contest. Very good poem. The bear ruined his plans, ha ha
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you, l really appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from gansach
This is a cute little limerick about fishy Finn who needs to be careful where he swims. I enjoyed this little story very much. Great entry for the silly rhyming poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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This is a cute little limerick about fishy Finn who needs to be careful where he swims. I enjoyed this little story very much. Great entry for the silly rhyming poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a charming poem! The playful language and clever rhyme scheme created such a fun story about Finn Malachi. The use of humor and personification adds to the enjoyment of the tale, making it a fun and memorable read. Overall, it's a clever and entertaining piece!
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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What a charming poem! The playful language and clever rhyme scheme created such a fun story about Finn Malachi. The use of humor and personification adds to the enjoyment of the tale, making it a fun and memorable read. Overall, it's a clever and entertaining piece!
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thanks so much for this terrific review...it makes my day! :)
Comment from HarryT
Like this little ditty, it made me smile, until poor fish, swam by the bear. But such is the way of the food chain. Great you found a fish with a bow tie. Wonder what the bear did with it. Maybe he sported it?
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Like this little ditty, it made me smile, until poor fish, swam by the bear. But such is the way of the food chain. Great you found a fish with a bow tie. Wonder what the bear did with it. Maybe he sported it?
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Maybe..lol. Thanks for this great review. :)