Next Best Thing
Turned down for the prom, but...3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is an odd story with a sad start and a good ending. It seems she is only going to prom with the quarterback because it is expected. But does the quarterback know that. Is Susie really the kind of girl Jon wants to go our with? Maybe she will be faithful to him.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Hi
This is an odd story with a sad start and a good ending. It seems she is only going to prom with the quarterback because it is expected. But does the quarterback know that. Is Susie really the kind of girl Jon wants to go our with? Maybe she will be faithful to him.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Good questions. Need more words. Thanks for the read and review.
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You're welcome on both accounts.
Joan
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Next Best Thing, has the proper word count and finds the day-late Jonathan getting an invitation for the next time. He's in the game.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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This one-hundred-word story, Next Best Thing, has the proper word count and finds the day-late Jonathan getting an invitation for the next time. He's in the game.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Flash 100 writing prompt. Finally! A flash story with a happy ending!! I am guessing that Susie will have a much better time with Jon than with Harry. thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the Flash 100 writing prompt. Finally! A flash story with a happy ending!! I am guessing that Susie will have a much better time with Jon than with Harry. thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thanks for the read and the review. I think you are correct about your guess.
