When I met you
A 5-7-7 three line poem15 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great 5-7-7 poem. I wonder why you didn't enter it in the contest. You got the syllable count right, and I loved your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I think this was a great 5-7-7 poem. I wonder why you didn't enter it in the contest. You got the syllable count right, and I loved your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-7, When I Met You, has the proper formatting and finds that the meeting of one's soulmate is even more powerful than the other can even imagine. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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This 5-7-7, When I Met You, has the proper formatting and finds that the meeting of one's soulmate is even more powerful than the other can even imagine. Nice.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Bill, yes our soul mate is worth finding, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Well done on a three-liner with rhyme. A dramatic and interesting image to accompany your work. I like the thoughts that your words have brought me to meditate on. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Well done on a three-liner with rhyme. A dramatic and interesting image to accompany your work. I like the thoughts that your words have brought me to meditate on. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Wendy, for your encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the alliteration here and the sentiment, we welcome this kind of support when we fall in love and feel rejuvenated at this kind of love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I enjoyed the alliteration here and the sentiment, we welcome this kind of support when we fall in love and feel rejuvenated at this kind of love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, thought I would practice something a bit different, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Each line leads nicely into the next.
-A good job describing the nature of love,
and how it can blossom when two souls
are in sync and feel the same way about each other.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Each line leads nicely into the next.
-A good job describing the nature of love,
and how it can blossom when two souls
are in sync and feel the same way about each other.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Pam, yes, I think we and or know when love happens, and we must accept and encourage it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot, and I agree with you about accepting love.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice katauta poem and presentation. People fantasize about their couple that sometimes is not based on reality.
Good syllables count. The lines connect grammatically... very nice.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Nice katauta poem and presentation. People fantasize about their couple that sometimes is not based on reality.
Good syllables count. The lines connect grammatically... very nice.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
nicely written with an illustration that improves its overall presentation
your rhyme scheme is ingenious - do like the few words needed to get your point across to reviewers
Mark
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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nicely written with an illustration that improves its overall presentation
your rhyme scheme is ingenious - do like the few words needed to get your point across to reviewers
Mark
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Mark for your help on this one, me thinks you have a good eye, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from gansach
This is a very good entry for the 5-7-7 competition. Good presentation, syllable count is correct. I like the rhyme and the artwork. Good effort. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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This is a very good entry for the 5-7-7 competition. Good presentation, syllable count is correct. I like the rhyme and the artwork. Good effort. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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I changed my review to reflect your correction. Good luck!
Comment from AP Apgar
I enjoyed you romance poem - excellent picture supporting- I also like the rhyming quality - your poem is thought provoking- perhaps the expectations were too high
For one or both of the parties- 'soul' - to me suggesting right or wrong? Nicely done - suggest- exceeds- over exceeded would give you seven syllables? Good job- Bless AP
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I enjoyed you romance poem - excellent picture supporting- I also like the rhyming quality - your poem is thought provoking- perhaps the expectations were too high
For one or both of the parties- 'soul' - to me suggesting right or wrong? Nicely done - suggest- exceeds- over exceeded would give you seven syllables? Good job- Bless AP
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you, AP, yes, caught that mistake, and I was tossing up between soul or heart, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I believe this might be somebody perhaps getting themselves into trouble because of getting in over their heads, which I think some of us have done that in the past. Well done, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I believe this might be somebody perhaps getting themselves into trouble because of getting in over their heads, which I think some of us have done that in the past. Well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you, Roy, yes, I think we have all done that, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
