Lair Of The Seductress
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Run, Chief, Run"Book Four Wolf Bend Series
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Comment from Thesis
I have to read this from the beginning. I like what I've read in this chapter. A lot is going on, good description, fear, and a sense of doom, combined with a good history of this woman's life and murders.
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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I have to read this from the beginning. I like what I've read in this chapter. A lot is going on, good description, fear, and a sense of doom, combined with a good history of this woman's life and murders.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thanks! This book is on an interesting path!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very interesting chapter and I like this spiral down in folklore and native American story telling elements. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Very interesting chapter and I like this spiral down in folklore and native American story telling elements. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you for dropping in, Iza! Appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
Well it looks like they've worked out the origin of lileth, around since the garden held Adam and Eve, Queen of the demons, hates religious symbols, can fly, a nasty piece of work, a succubus, beautifully written Douglas blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Well it looks like they've worked out the origin of lileth, around since the garden held Adam and Eve, Queen of the demons, hates religious symbols, can fly, a nasty piece of work, a succubus, beautifully written Douglas blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Roy!
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Welcome Douglas
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not good that Greg is going after Katie by himself. He's putting himself in danger and he doesn't know it. He hasn't put it all together yet. Not good. But his love for Jenny may protect him. This is another great write.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Not good that Greg is going after Katie by himself. He's putting himself in danger and he doesn't know it. He hasn't put it all together yet. Not good. But his love for Jenny may protect him. This is another great write.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Barbara! This is going to get real intense real quick. but, I bet you expected that!
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I did. I know your writing.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You know how to build the tension, Doug! First all the background to the Succubus, then the terrifying dream, then woken up to discover that our friend, Kelsey is on the loose. Well at least Greg is prepped and knows that he'd better turn himself into a religious man pretty damn quick!! A very brave man about to face this evil, supernatural entity! Well done, Doug, on another excellent chapter! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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You know how to build the tension, Doug! First all the background to the Succubus, then the terrifying dream, then woken up to discover that our friend, Kelsey is on the loose. Well at least Greg is prepped and knows that he'd better turn himself into a religious man pretty damn quick!! A very brave man about to face this evil, supernatural entity! Well done, Doug, on another excellent chapter! Debbie
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thanks, Debbie. I thought I would change it up and let the readers know that the killer was Officer Katie Kelsey before Greg finds out. HA!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
NIcely done! The intensity of the story grows in this chapter. The exploration of Lilith's origins as a succubus adds a chilling layer to the story. I thought the conversation with Alexander Harper really impacted Greg and his investigation. I thought the buildup of Greg confronting Lilith was excellent. You could feel the tension! Well done again.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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NIcely done! The intensity of the story grows in this chapter. The exploration of Lilith's origins as a succubus adds a chilling layer to the story. I thought the conversation with Alexander Harper really impacted Greg and his investigation. I thought the buildup of Greg confronting Lilith was excellent. You could feel the tension! Well done again.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Michael! Appreciate you dropping in.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You had a lot to write in this chapter
It seemed longer than the others and a number of new characters popped up
Then there is the Inquisition initiative
A lot going on
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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You had a lot to write in this chapter
It seemed longer than the others and a number of new characters popped up
Then there is the Inquisition initiative
A lot going on
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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We are on the fast track to the end now, Tom.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
All rightee, then. Now we're gettin' somewhere. Only now Greg had better be gettin' religious in a hurry!
Nicely written. error-free as near as I can tell.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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All rightee, then. Now we're gettin' somewhere. Only now Greg had better be gettin' religious in a hurry!
Nicely written. error-free as near as I can tell.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you, Wayne. I think I will post Wednesday. We are on the fast track now!
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I fast tracked right through the Ben Persons saga. Got to where I was posting every 3 days to get through the 130+ chapters.
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That's a heavy lift, my friend. Could not have been fun.