Dance!
Celebrate good feelings!9 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this very much. It reads well (with good syntax) and is clearly and attractively presented. My only worry is that the prompt says not to produce a list of words. But I wish you luck anyway because, so far, so good! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I like this very much. It reads well (with good syntax) and is clearly and attractively presented. My only worry is that the prompt says not to produce a list of words. But I wish you luck anyway because, so far, so good! Debbie
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Wendy G
This is cohesive and coherent, and it is very well presented. I like the message and you have conveyed it well and clearly. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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This is cohesive and coherent, and it is very well presented. I like the message and you have conveyed it well and clearly. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
good idea of how to use the alphabet letters without forgetting them. It seems the dancer might be limber and have some dance moves that some of us don't have.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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good idea of how to use the alphabet letters without forgetting them. It seems the dancer might be limber and have some dance moves that some of us don't have.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This abecedarian poem, Dance, has the proper formatting and calls the readers to cast off their sitting clothes and pull on their dance pants and shimmy shoes.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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This abecedarian poem, Dance, has the proper formatting and calls the readers to cast off their sitting clothes and pull on their dance pants and shimmy shoes.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thanks so much--I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Sally Law
Mystery poet, you did a fantastic job with this alphabet poem. Easy to read and beautifully crafted and illustrated. A winner in my eyes!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Mystery poet, you did a fantastic job with this alphabet poem. Easy to read and beautifully crafted and illustrated. A winner in my eyes!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you so much--I appreciate your wonderful review and kind words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever post and I enjoyed this wild ride through an alphabet of dance and lighthearted movement, a colourful and well put together post for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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This is a clever post and I enjoyed this wild ride through an alphabet of dance and lighthearted movement, a colourful and well put together post for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you so I much for your lovely review and the extra star. I appreciate it so much!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute little poem and very joyful and it makes you dance on this multicolor alphabet. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Cute little poem and very joyful and it makes you dance on this multicolor alphabet. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from bob cullen
Very clever, I didn't realise there were so many really clever writers on this Fanstory site. It is a privilege to write on such a talented site. Good luck in this contest. I don't think this one will be easy to win, then again none of them are.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Very clever, I didn't realise there were so many really clever writers on this Fanstory site. It is a privilege to write on such a talented site. Good luck in this contest. I don't think this one will be easy to win, then again none of them are.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from kahpot
How so very clever, yes, I am sure everyone does have some joy and dance moves within, love your use of all the letters and ability to hold a message/story, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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How so very clever, yes, I am sure everyone does have some joy and dance moves within, love your use of all the letters and ability to hold a message/story, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you so much!