Weary
Under 10 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You convey so much in this very succinct form, even limiting yourself to one less than the maximum. The weariness is reflected from the image; the 'hunger' cleverly resonates with physical hunger and appetite and you start and finish effectively with two polar opposites, making a strong statement for peace. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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You convey so much in this very succinct form, even limiting yourself to one less than the maximum. The weariness is reflected from the image; the 'hunger' cleverly resonates with physical hunger and appetite and you start and finish effectively with two polar opposites, making a strong statement for peace. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Superb review. Zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing about war and peace is touching and timely. Your writing captures the need for the end of war. Your ability to convey such profound themes in just a few words is so impressive!
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Your writing about war and peace is touching and timely. Your writing captures the need for the end of war. Your ability to convey such profound themes in just a few words is so impressive!
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thanks for reviewing and for the accolade, Zanya
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. You have written a powerful poem in just eight words. I wish that by saying it over and over again , peace would come to stay.
Good luck in the contest
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Hi. You have written a powerful poem in just eight words. I wish that by saying it over and over again , peace would come to stay.
Good luck in the contest
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Yes, if only.... Thanks for reviewing, Zanya
