Morning Ryokan Thought
morning routine expressed in Ryokan form4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jake,
This is a good poem about the effect of the news on most of us. Music can have a calming effect on all bad or dangerous emotions.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good day.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Hi Jake,
This is a good poem about the effect of the news on most of us. Music can have a calming effect on all bad or dangerous emotions.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good day.
Joan
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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thanks a lot as always
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thanks as always
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this verse form. Your words fit it perfectly and I drifted into that private space you needed to escape the horrors of the news. I particularly liked the third stanza. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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I like this verse form. Your words fit it perfectly and I drifted into that private space you needed to escape the horrors of the news. I particularly liked the third stanza. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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thanks a lot
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thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a lot of bad news about and I protect myself from it by just having a filtered news feed on my phone. I am glad you are calmed by your favourite music as we cannot change the world. A poignant post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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There is a lot of bad news about and I protect myself from it by just having a filtered news feed on my phone. I am glad you are calmed by your favourite music as we cannot change the world. A poignant post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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thanks a lot
Comment from Julie Helms
I'm not familiar with this style of verse, but it seems especially effective in conveying a series of emotions. You've done this very well! I can imagine each step of the process you go through.
Fade aways (Fades away)
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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I'm not familiar with this style of verse, but it seems especially effective in conveying a series of emotions. You've done this very well! I can imagine each step of the process you go through.
Fade aways (Fades away)
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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thanks as always