Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

This piece has a disjointed feel to it which I think is representative of the traumatic tale told.

A few suggestions:

were way to graphic for this site.
(...too graphic...)

two 26 foot truck loads from a 850 square foot locker.
(two 26-foot truck....850-square-foot locker)

this would not do for thr owner
(...the owner)

I wish you a speedy recovery!
Julie

 Comment Written 18-May-2024

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reply by the author on 18-May-2024

Thanks Julie a d stay tuned on this one.
A d, it will ne lengthy.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

I feel as though I've come into the middle of something I don't fully understand. However, this chapter reminds me of horrible rental experiences I have had. First of all, my husband and I moved from one state to another. The company moving our furniture charged an extra arm and leg, and broke down on the highway. Recently, my husband rented a car while his car was in the shop for repairs. The rental car made it to our house and the battery died. The rental had to be towed away. Life is strange, but still, we are all blessed.

 Comment Written 18-May-2024

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reply by the author on 18-May-2024

Thanks LJButterfly
Stay tuned
More a little later...
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