Word Woven Tapestries
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Down Where Mermaids Dwell "A collection of poems which tell a story.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautiful visual which is reflected well in your rhyming quatrains. I like the repeat of that first line which reminds me of the regular rolling of the waves. And then your curiosity of what lies beneath the sea, its mythical charms, all very haunting and mysterious. This is nicely done with much thought and imagination. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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A beautiful visual which is reflected well in your rhyming quatrains. I like the repeat of that first line which reminds me of the regular rolling of the waves. And then your curiosity of what lies beneath the sea, its mythical charms, all very haunting and mysterious. This is nicely done with much thought and imagination. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Thank you. You reviewing and comments mean a great deal to me.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem about down under the sea. I enjoyed it very much. I only have one little problem with it. I think you need to check the last line in the fourth stanza. I think you mean lead instead of Patricia .
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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This is a very well written poem about down under the sea. I enjoyed it very much. I only have one little problem with it. I think you need to check the last line in the fourth stanza. I think you mean lead instead of Patricia .
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Okay, I'll recheck it. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.