Digging Deep
What would 'you' do?3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nothing was resolved. The story had no ending. It just stopped. I feel all cheated. The story has grown from 10 comments to 23. Some are hysterical. Take another look. Karen
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Nothing was resolved. The story had no ending. It just stopped. I feel all cheated. The story has grown from 10 comments to 23. Some are hysterical. Take another look. Karen
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Yes, this was the kind of story requiring readers to speculate what they would do, themselves. Then ending I wrote just wasn't the same as what 'you' would have done. But in my defense, the prompt was about the digging.
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I still feel all gripey .
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huge smiley face here
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect piece for the Dig Deep writing prompt entry with best of wishes in the contest my friend! Well written and thought out indeed!
God bless you!
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Perfect piece for the Dig Deep writing prompt entry with best of wishes in the contest my friend! Well written and thought out indeed!
God bless you!
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate you confidence!
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;-)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was very enjoyable to read. The casual dialogue is strong. I thought hte characters came across as "real" and easy to connect with. The discovery of the tombstones in the backyard does a great job of setting up this story. I enjoyed watching them try to figure out the implications of their findings. The dialogue between the neighbors is great. I wasn't sure what was going to happen here. Your story easily kept me interested!
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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This was very enjoyable to read. The casual dialogue is strong. I thought hte characters came across as "real" and easy to connect with. The discovery of the tombstones in the backyard does a great job of setting up this story. I enjoyed watching them try to figure out the implications of their findings. The dialogue between the neighbors is great. I wasn't sure what was going to happen here. Your story easily kept me interested!
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your review.
Wasn't sure whether the 'left hanging' ending would work.