Wal-Mart!
Humorous poem on the joy of Wal-Mart5 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck!
I thought this was just as you said. A humorous poem about Walmart.
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" Overflowing with pools and modular airplanes". Did you mean model airplanes?
I really got a kick out of your poem
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck!
I thought this was just as you said. A humorous poem about Walmart.
Here
" Overflowing with pools and modular airplanes". Did you mean model airplanes?
I really got a kick out of your poem
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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I did mean model airplanes but I think we can say both. And thank you :)
Comment from Feidhlim Glynn
As someone who went to a Walmart recently for the first time, (I'm not American) I definitely got the sense of how much was in it l. This poem definitely helped to let me know I'm not the only one who can find it overwhelming.
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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As someone who went to a Walmart recently for the first time, (I'm not American) I definitely got the sense of how much was in it l. This poem definitely helped to let me know I'm not the only one who can find it overwhelming.
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you !! And I'm not American either so I don't go that often either. Only 2 or 3 times. So surprised by how many things there were!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job of painting a picture of all the offerings at Walmart. I love that you show children eagerly exploring the toy gallery.
The lines "BUY ME!" and "PICK ME!" from the various items on display was perfect. Your poem captures the Walmart shopping experience with wit and fun.
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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I thought you did a great job of painting a picture of all the offerings at Walmart. I love that you show children eagerly exploring the toy gallery.
The lines "BUY ME!" and "PICK ME!" from the various items on display was perfect. Your poem captures the Walmart shopping experience with wit and fun.
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and the more I hear about Walmart, the more I want to visit the store, it sounds like a lot of fun, loves your rhymes and flow and sentiment here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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This made me smile and the more I hear about Walmart, the more I want to visit the store, it sounds like a lot of fun, loves your rhymes and flow and sentiment here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you:):)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Things you See At Walmart contest. Wow. you really covered the variety of stuff! lol If you can't find it at Walmart then you just don't need it! That's my motto anyway. Actually, even the stuff i find is stuff that i don't need lol Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the Things you See At Walmart contest. Wow. you really covered the variety of stuff! lol If you can't find it at Walmart then you just don't need it! That's my motto anyway. Actually, even the stuff i find is stuff that i don't need lol Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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thanks! Agree 100% with you!!