500 Days--From a Distance
song lyrics from the metal band in my head2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was so creative! Your song captures the creative process so well. I love how you explore the journey of crafting a story. The repetition of the verses and choruses works so well. I thought your writing serves as a reminder of our power to evoke a range of emotions, from joy to sorrow, through words and yes - song! Well done!
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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I thought this was so creative! Your song captures the creative process so well. I love how you explore the journey of crafting a story. The repetition of the verses and choruses works so well. I thought your writing serves as a reminder of our power to evoke a range of emotions, from joy to sorrow, through words and yes - song! Well done!
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you, Michael
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Mike, you show your poetic dexterity in this poem. You are really very talented! Now and then, the song writer in you pops out, and this is one of those times.
The words on the page tell a story
In the hunt for approval and glory
The perfect song is just one line away
String them together and win the day
It really tells a story of how you compose as song and how that song tells a story.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Mike, you show your poetic dexterity in this poem. You are really very talented! Now and then, the song writer in you pops out, and this is one of those times.
The words on the page tell a story
In the hunt for approval and glory
The perfect song is just one line away
String them together and win the day
It really tells a story of how you compose as song and how that song tells a story.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you, Rhonda