Comment from gansach

Excellent

This is a very good entry for the 15 syllable poem competition. The accompanying artwork fits your poem perfectly, your syllable count is correct, and your words are deep with a profound message. Very well done! Good luck!

 Comment Written 18-May-2024

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reply by the author on 18-May-2024

Thank you!

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

Very good, and so philosophical. Our eyes and ears may not be able to speak, but gee they are good at interpretating the unspoken word. This is a very good and provocative write. Pity we don't all take note.

 Comment Written 18-May-2024

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reply by the author on 18-May-2024

Thank you and I agree

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Silence can often speak volumes as we rely on looks and atmospherics and we seem to pay more attention to it that words people speak, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 16-May-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

This is oh so true, what a message converyed here in 15 syllables, a different message will be taken by certain people depending on how they perceive it. Well done, strong words!

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 15-May-2024

Thank you!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Is a very nice 15 syllable form that you have written and I wish you the very best in the contest. Sometimes silence is the best thing that we can do. Patricia .

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 15-May-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. A very profound statement in only firteen syllables. silence has so much to say if only we are open to hearing it. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 15-May-2024

Thank you!