My Need for Competition
I love the feeling of being a team member.2 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
I really love the expression of dedication in this poem, of you work hard you get results, keep it at and you will success. The terms 'veins throbbing' and 'simmering anticipation' are a great way to describe the feelings before a game, you're very lucky to be part of team that work so hard together to make each other proud and there is no better feeling than the win! Well done
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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I really love the expression of dedication in this poem, of you work hard you get results, keep it at and you will success. The terms 'veins throbbing' and 'simmering anticipation' are a great way to describe the feelings before a game, you're very lucky to be part of team that work so hard together to make each other proud and there is no better feeling than the win! Well done
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for the feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you are very competitive in this sport and intend to win for the team and I am certain that you are appreciated for your enthusiasm. I also love bowling but rarely get a ful strike! I enjoyed your story poem for the contest, you brought the competition to life here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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It sounds like you are very competitive in this sport and intend to win for the team and I am certain that you are appreciated for your enthusiasm. I also love bowling but rarely get a ful strike! I enjoyed your story poem for the contest, you brought the competition to life here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you, my dear. Appreciate your feedback.