Suburban Episodes
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
A very nice form that you have written for the 57577 contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful evening and may God bless you have a good weekend. Patricia .
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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A very nice form that you have written for the 57577 contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful evening and may God bless you have a good weekend. Patricia .
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and good presentation, Mark.
-It is always good to see you.
-You wrote a good tanka with a good topic.
-You establish the premise in the opening lines,
giving details about this woman.
-A good pivot line.
-You always have something to think about
at the end; I enjoy that aspect of your writing.
-In this case the woman is aware of what
other women around her are chatting about,
but she was not going to act like she
understood even though she did.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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-Nice image and good presentation, Mark.
-It is always good to see you.
-You wrote a good tanka with a good topic.
-You establish the premise in the opening lines,
giving details about this woman.
-A good pivot line.
-You always have something to think about
at the end; I enjoy that aspect of your writing.
-In this case the woman is aware of what
other women around her are chatting about,
but she was not going to act like she
understood even though she did.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you for your review and insightful words.
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You are very welcome.