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A story poem

6 total reviews 
Comment from BermyBye50
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Jackie,

Congrats on winning the Story Poem Contest. It was an honor to finish second to your well written creative tale of a talking tree and a curious owl. Your use of dialogue between the owl and the tree enhanced the story and made it the front-runner in the contest and deserved to win.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 18-May-2024

Comment from E.P. Mackey
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Very clever poem! I love the personalities you gave both the owl and the tree. This was quite a delight to read :) I wish you much luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Thank you! It was fun to write
Comment from gansach
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This is a very cute poem. I like the bantering tone of the conversation, nice rhymes, line count is spot on. A good entry for the Stpry Poem competition. Great job!

 Comment Written 15-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from nancyjam
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I enjoyed your fun poem. Your rhyming is great and the conversation with the owl is written cleverly.
A very clever and well done answer to the challenge.
I wish you best of luck in contest.
Nancy

 Comment Written 14-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Bridge
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A beautiful story and very well told. Very creative. I love the rhyming and the creative way you have addressed the prompt. Wishing you the very best in the contest

 Comment Written 14-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your witty dialogue between the owl and the pygmy so funny. The playful banter between creates a fun exchange, and the twist at the end was great. The rhythm and flow of the conversation make it easy to imagine the interaction unfolding in the forest. Overall, you've crafted a clever and entertaining piece!

 Comment Written 14-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Thanks, it was fun to write.