Comment from Esther Brown

Excellent

I can't believe I read the whole thing to the end before I got it! Very funny, loved it. You definitely engaged the reader from the beginning. Not being a shopper myself, I was intrigued by such uncommon interest in whatever plastic thing you thoughtlessly bought. Very well done. Hope you do well in the contest. Esther

 Comment Written 14-May-2024

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reply by the author on 14-May-2024

Thank you, Esther :)

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Definitely got more than what either of you bargained for....Gotta watch out for those sneaky sales people, especially at places that sell babies. Glad it's just a fictional story. LOL Great job!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 14-May-2024

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reply by the author on 14-May-2024

Thank you, Carol :)

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

This is a rather unique take on retail therapy a sci-fi story. I did not spot that for quite a while as your story seems to be timeless. I wish you all the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 14-May-2024

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reply by the author on 14-May-2024

Thank you, Mark.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Retail Therapy writing prompt. I loved this quirky, creative story. It was as unique as the baby in the story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-May-2024

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reply by the author on 14-May-2024

Thank you, Marilyn :)