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Birds and Stars

A four line poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sanku
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That;s irony! Trees fenced by tall buildings! But thats we have come to in the present days concrete jungles.
a very thought provoking lines. Trees definitely miss their bird friends..

 Comment Written 14-May-2024


reply by the author on 14-May-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
    With kind regards
Comment from kahpot
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So very well written on a wonderful subject, the climate and man's need to build is definitely hiding the beauty of nature, an excellent short poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-May-2024


reply by the author on 14-May-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
    With kind regards