Asking out
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is lovely and a perfect accompaniment to the visual. I particularly like the word 'ahem.' Unfortunately, though, it's 2 syllables, making that line 6 instead of 5. You could always say: Would you like ahem/to have a coffee (thus avoiding saying 'go out' twice?) Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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This is lovely and a perfect accompaniment to the visual. I particularly like the word 'ahem.' Unfortunately, though, it's 2 syllables, making that line 6 instead of 5. You could always say: Would you like ahem/to have a coffee (thus avoiding saying 'go out' twice?) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. Good advice.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Four Line poem contest. This is the answer you always hope you will get when you ask someone out for a coffee. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the Four Line poem contest. This is the answer you always hope you will get when you ask someone out for a coffee. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.
