Where's Mummy?
Two strangers meet in a storm2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was very well done. You do a great job of blending elements of humor and tension. Add to that the unexpected twists and your story kept me engaged and eager to see how she would handle this. The character development was excellent. I thought Paul was very well written. I found myself rooting for them throughout the story!
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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This was very well done. You do a great job of blending elements of humor and tension. Add to that the unexpected twists and your story kept me engaged and eager to see how she would handle this. The character development was excellent. I thought Paul was very well written. I found myself rooting for them throughout the story!
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you, Michael. This has made my day.I'm glad you enjoyed the wee tale.
Comment from zanya
An enthralling story about a pending storm - the tension mounts effectively through various normal, everyday incidents - no flagging here- so well narrated
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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An enthralling story about a pending storm - the tension mounts effectively through various normal, everyday incidents - no flagging here- so well narrated
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Many thanks, Zanya, for the six stars and your encouragement. I am glad you enjoyed 'Where's Mummy?
