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A Typical Day At Wal-Mart

It is interesting what you can see by just sitting & looking

4 total reviews 
Comment from RJ Heritage
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It coveted many aspects of strange goings-on at Walmart, and it was also funny. It was a very good effort that showed creativity.
Good luck inbthe contest
RJ

 Comment Written 19-May-2024


reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    Thank you so much!
reply by RJ Heritage on 21-May-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Do you work there, Mystery Writer? You see to have a bead on all the various types of clientele to be found in those illustrious aisles!! I hope all your people-watching pays off for you at the polls! xo

 Comment Written 18-May-2024


reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    No, I have never worked at Wal-Mart, but I often have to bring my mother and I usually wait in the car while she is shopping and I see quite a bit. Also, whenever our power would go out, my late husband and I would go and walk around Wal-Mart as there was nothing else to do. Thanks for the review and the well wishes.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 20-May-2024
    What a good idea! It's lighted and has everything one could possible need to pass the time! Smart on you!!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Things You See at Walmart contest. You definitely covered a wide variety of common sights lol As a former Floridian there is nothing you could tell me that would surprise me about what showed up at walmart. Nicely done. Good luck

 Comment Written 13-May-2024


reply by the author on 14-May-2024
    Thanks! I brought my mother to Wal-Mart and I was waiting in the car and saw the guy mentioned in the beginning of the poem. It just went from there.
Comment from Julie Helms
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Someone who's never been to Walmart probably wouldn't believe half of this. My husband worked there for about 5 years...oh the stories.
Good poem getting across clearly a cross-section of humanity that we might've missed otherwise!
Julie

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 14-May-2024
    Thanks! I brought my mother to Wal-Mart and I was waiting in the car and saw the guy mentioned in the beginning of the poem. It just went from there.