Lair Of The Seductress
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Kenny"Book Four Wolf Bend Series
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Comment from royowen
So that's how it happens, in a sense it's justice, an unredeemable price to pay for her a brief ecstatic experience, I was wondering what turns to ash, could it be...?, beautifully written Douglas, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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So that's how it happens, in a sense it's justice, an unredeemable price to pay for her a brief ecstatic experience, I was wondering what turns to ash, could it be...?, beautifully written Douglas, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Ha! It?s the heart!
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Wow, I must say it was a surprise ending to this chapter. It only goes to show where most men's brain is located. Sorry, no offense intended.
It is a good chapter. You use 'befuddled' twice quite close to each other. I will be following this story from now on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Wow, I must say it was a surprise ending to this chapter. It only goes to show where most men's brain is located. Sorry, no offense intended.
It is a good chapter. You use 'befuddled' twice quite close to each other. I will be following this story from now on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Great catch! Thank you for stopping in, Ulla! I always respect you're keen eye!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Lilith here is totally opposite of the woman Frasier married, and yours must have had a horrible childhood dealing with men or a man, like a brother or a father. You kept me entertained, then left me wanton or is that wanting?
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Lilith here is totally opposite of the woman Frasier married, and yours must have had a horrible childhood dealing with men or a man, like a brother or a father. You kept me entertained, then left me wanton or is that wanting?
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Lilith was Officer Katie Kelsey all along. I bet that spells trouble for Greg. Let?s see!
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Don't wake sleeping dogs. They ight bite one in the arse.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
OH MY!! This is six worthy but I don't have any left. DARN!!!!! Okay, now I have a question, maybe two. So is Katie Kelsey really Lilith or has Lilith invaded her body?? I am curious about this. GREAT WRITING!!!!
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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OH MY!! This is six worthy but I don't have any left. DARN!!!!! Okay, now I have a question, maybe two. So is Katie Kelsey really Lilith or has Lilith invaded her body?? I am curious about this. GREAT WRITING!!!!
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you! We shall see what happens next!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh yes, it started with the clue of the mini skirt and then there was only going to be one outcome, once he confessed his infidelity. And revenge is so sweet for her, impassioned sex followed by that climactic fiery death! Quite a night for both and a bit of Latin (not sure what) thrown in! Well this certainly wakes us up on a Monday morning! Well done, Doug! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Oh yes, it started with the clue of the mini skirt and then there was only going to be one outcome, once he confessed his infidelity. And revenge is so sweet for her, impassioned sex followed by that climactic fiery death! Quite a night for both and a bit of Latin (not sure what) thrown in! Well this certainly wakes us up on a Monday morning! Well done, Doug! Debbie
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. Katie Kelsey all along. This can?t be good.
Comment from Julie Helms
Yum, more demon sex. Lol! So Lilith is definitely waiting for the cheating and guilt to strike and it sends her into a real orgasm that she probably faked minutes earlier. Definitely a power boost for her. Very interesting dynamic.
No errors noted. Great job.
Julie
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Yum, more demon sex. Lol! So Lilith is definitely waiting for the cheating and guilt to strike and it sends her into a real orgasm that she probably faked minutes earlier. Definitely a power boost for her. Very interesting dynamic.
No errors noted. Great job.
Julie
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Yes! And there were clues that Kelsey was a spirit in the last two books. This goes very bad bet quick!