Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Aiona,
It is so sad for a child to be denied motherly love. But it is good when she can turn it around to be a good loving parent.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024

Thanks for your review, Joan.

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

This seems bitter and angry but does not give any reason why, It poses questions whilst providing no answers. I wish you luck in the contest and wish you well.

 Comment Written 11-May-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Mark. You were right on the money that it was written in anger. :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

The word of God tells us that when mothers and fathers for psychos he will never leave us our first sneak so it's definitely all right to turn to God when mothers and fathers do not pay attention to their children. Patricia .

 Comment Written 11-May-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Patricia.