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A doctor departing from his caring role to show his feelings
2 total reviews
Comment from
Wayne Fowler
Nice concept.
Here are a couple minor glitches.
The doctor was angry, -very angry. - either the comma, or the dash
...no government funding for people under 65.If there injury had been... - space after the period. Also, (their)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
Comment from
Mark Jackson
Sorry, I read your story and do not see the cognitive dissonance here. Cognitive dissonance is a psychological phenomenon that occurs when a person holds two contradictory beliefs at the same time. I did not see that here.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
thanks- I must have got that wrong
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