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Cognitive Dissonance

A doctor departing from his caring role to show his feelings

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Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Nice concept.
Here are a couple minor glitches.
The doctor was angry, -very angry. - either the comma, or the dash
...no government funding for people under 65.If there injury had been... - space after the period. Also, (their)
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-May-2024


reply by the author on 14-May-2024
    thanks Wayne
Comment from Mark Jackson
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Sorry, I read your story and do not see the cognitive dissonance here. Cognitive dissonance is a psychological phenomenon that occurs when a person holds two contradictory beliefs at the same time. I did not see that here.

 Comment Written 11-May-2024


reply by the author on 14-May-2024
    thanks- I must have got that wrong