An Ode to Darkness
tribute to the beauty & significance of the night.2 total reviews
Comment from Wendy Rappeport
i loved the gentle rhymes. I'm not personally familiar with poetry and often find the rhymes forced and awkward. It was a fine song to the sky above. Thanks for sharing
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i loved the gentle rhymes. I'm not personally familiar with poetry and often find the rhymes forced and awkward. It was a fine song to the sky above. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 11-May-2024
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your tribute to darkness and her constant companion the moon also serves as an illumination of your own feelings of sadness (blue) and loneliness.
The idea of a negative being needed to highlight positive qualities is not new but you use it well here in your series of IF clauses.
An emotional piece.
Steve
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Your tribute to darkness and her constant companion the moon also serves as an illumination of your own feelings of sadness (blue) and loneliness.
The idea of a negative being needed to highlight positive qualities is not new but you use it well here in your series of IF clauses.
An emotional piece.
Steve
Comment Written 11-May-2024
