2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Gloria ....
The visuals here are stunning. I've never seen anything like this magical setting, but it certainly draws forth memories on seeing a sun set on the ocean.
Gold is such a rich colour.
Very much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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The visuals here are stunning. I've never seen anything like this magical setting, but it certainly draws forth memories on seeing a sun set on the ocean.
Gold is such a rich colour.
Very much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Gloria. It's good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
What a lovely poem dear Gypsy, you have crafted something rather upbeat and positive, with divine language and a very positive mature, as always beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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What a lovely poem dear Gypsy, you have crafted something rather upbeat and positive, with divine language and a very positive mature, as always beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. I hope you have a wonderful day.
gypsy
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Well done
Comment from shelley kaye
love the gold dripping from the pic!! way cool visual!
love the line "veiled with golden stardust", too - nice imagery -
nice smooth flow throughout the lines
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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love the gold dripping from the pic!! way cool visual!
love the line "veiled with golden stardust", too - nice imagery -
nice smooth flow throughout the lines
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much for the kind review.
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
Gypsy you used your poetic artistry to fantastic effect in this write. The write brought back to mind the times I've seen the huge golden moon hovering close to earth. You invoke the goddess Luna. There's also a Mayan goddess of the moon. Got to know of her when I was vacationing in Cancun. Her temple is close by on Isla Mujeres.
Btw the presentation is out of this world! LOL
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Gypsy you used your poetic artistry to fantastic effect in this write. The write brought back to mind the times I've seen the huge golden moon hovering close to earth. You invoke the goddess Luna. There's also a Mayan goddess of the moon. Got to know of her when I was vacationing in Cancun. Her temple is close by on Isla Mujeres.
Btw the presentation is out of this world! LOL
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much for the kind review.
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this is such a fun and happy poem. The imagery is great. I could see the whole scene. I'm going to lookout for the Luna Moon Goddess tonight. I hope she drops some gold my way. Big-teeth smile.
Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Hi Gypsy, this is such a fun and happy poem. The imagery is great. I could see the whole scene. I'm going to lookout for the Luna Moon Goddess tonight. I hope she drops some gold my way. Big-teeth smile.
Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much for the kind review.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The imagery in this poem is absolutely wonderful!!! I loved it. I could see this golden stardust Luna Moon, dropping gold as she sailed across the sky. Perfect.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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The imagery in this poem is absolutely wonderful!!! I loved it. I could see this golden stardust Luna Moon, dropping gold as she sailed across the sky. Perfect.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was chocked full of delicious imagery and then it hinted at folklore and history. Beautiful image of the liquidy drops of gold. I could see the movement. This was breathtaking. Sorry l don't have a six left. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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This was chocked full of delicious imagery and then it hinted at folklore and history. Beautiful image of the liquidy drops of gold. I could see the movement. This was breathtaking. Sorry l don't have a six left. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much for the kind review.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Jackson
What a fantastic image to create a golden moon is not something I have seen before so it has a uniqueness to it. I particularly like the final line it is kind of special and pleasant to say.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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What a fantastic image to create a golden moon is not something I have seen before so it has a uniqueness to it. I particularly like the final line it is kind of special and pleasant to say.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much for the kind review.
Gypsy
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Nice Luna poem about Luna the Greek goddess of the Moon. I like the tone and the image painted. A new form to try. I like the last line the best as if sums up the spirit of the poem.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Nice Luna poem about Luna the Greek goddess of the Moon. I like the tone and the image painted. A new form to try. I like the last line the best as if sums up the spirit of the poem.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from kiwisteveh
man, these Japanese poets are busy people, always out there creating new and weird forms with names impossible to spell. It's almost like they hate us...
Beautiful presentation as always and your piece drips with golden imagery to enhance your words.
Good stuff!
Steve
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reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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man, these Japanese poets are busy people, always out there creating new and weird forms with names impossible to spell. It's almost like they hate us...
Beautiful presentation as always and your piece drips with golden imagery to enhance your words.
Good stuff!
Steve
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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