Happy, happy, happy
life in the present moment18 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
Such a lovely written poem. We forget sometimes to stop and observe and appreciate the world around us and how the simple things in life can bring such joy. Beautiful nature anecdotes brought me on your evening stroll. Well done
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Such a lovely written poem. We forget sometimes to stop and observe and appreciate the world around us and how the simple things in life can bring such joy. Beautiful nature anecdotes brought me on your evening stroll. Well done
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Nicola, thank you!
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is such a lovely piece that reminds us that it doesn't need to take a lot of money or a lot of resources to find and provide happiness. You made your reader happy by opening a window into yourself to show us the joy that you receive from multiple sources.
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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This is such a lovely piece that reminds us that it doesn't need to take a lot of money or a lot of resources to find and provide happiness. You made your reader happy by opening a window into yourself to show us the joy that you receive from multiple sources.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Dr. Nad, thank you!
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I enjoyed the imagery of your verse particularly in the second stanza which is very vivid and relatable in its freshness and luminous charm. And the whole post evokes a sense of happiness and sheer enjoyment of life, in-keeping with the title. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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I enjoyed the imagery of your verse particularly in the second stanza which is very vivid and relatable in its freshness and luminous charm. And the whole post evokes a sense of happiness and sheer enjoyment of life, in-keeping with the title. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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My sincere gratitude for your validation, thank you !
Comment from June Sargent
This one put a smile on my face. Embracing the moment is what will keep us moving forward. We can't mire ourselves in the past with regrets, nor should we face the future with fear. To be happy, we need to live, love and laugh in the moment. Words of wisdom.
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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This one put a smile on my face. Embracing the moment is what will keep us moving forward. We can't mire ourselves in the past with regrets, nor should we face the future with fear. To be happy, we need to live, love and laugh in the moment. Words of wisdom.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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June, thank you much!
Comment from Wendy G
Lots of beautiful experiences are mentioned here - reasons for beighappy, and these things we need to notice and appreciate and be grateful for. Well written poem. Best wishes for the contest!
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Lots of beautiful experiences are mentioned here - reasons for beighappy, and these things we need to notice and appreciate and be grateful for. Well written poem. Best wishes for the contest!
Wendy
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Wendy, thank you very much.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hey you missed out
Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens
Bright copper kettles and warm woolen mittens
Brown paper packages tied up with strings
Seriously though I enjoyed your little list poem about the things that make you happy, although I might skip the thunderstorms with dancing tree branches.
Good luck in the contest!
Steve
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Hey you missed out
Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens
Bright copper kettles and warm woolen mittens
Brown paper packages tied up with strings
Seriously though I enjoyed your little list poem about the things that make you happy, although I might skip the thunderstorms with dancing tree branches.
Good luck in the contest!
Steve
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank for the chuckles, Steve!
Comment from Janet Foor
Sweet. I love all these things that make you happy. Excellent artwork and presentation with great rhymes and alliteration making your poem a joy to read.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Sweet. I love all these things that make you happy. Excellent artwork and presentation with great rhymes and alliteration making your poem a joy to read.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Janet, thank you.
Comment from zanya
It's a great title - and the poem reminds us of the delightful activities of the normal day that brings us happiness in our life-and a superb pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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It's a great title - and the poem reminds us of the delightful activities of the normal day that brings us happiness in our life-and a superb pic to illustrate
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Zanya, thank you and be Happy......
Comment from juliaSjames
A lovely entry for the contest that is in line with all the requirements. I agree with you that it's the simple things in life that bring contentment and more so when there's love to light one's life
Best of luck
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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A lovely entry for the contest that is in line with all the requirements. I agree with you that it's the simple things in life that bring contentment and more so when there's love to light one's life
Best of luck
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Julia, thanks for your validation.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you like a good thunderstorm here and strolling hand in hand is a magical pastime with someone we care about. I enjoyed this walk through what makes you happy. The simple things in life seem to make us really happy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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It sounds like you like a good thunderstorm here and strolling hand in hand is a magical pastime with someone we care about. I enjoyed this walk through what makes you happy. The simple things in life seem to make us really happy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Yes, smiles are brighter and everyday life more digestable with a great soulmate.
