A Creator's Touch
I admire so much...3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem about what makes you so happy. Those things make me so happy too. We are truly blessed to have such a loving and caring God that loves His children so much. I love the Sunday School song you posted too. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem about what makes you so happy. Those things make me so happy too. We are truly blessed to have such a loving and caring God that loves His children so much. I love the Sunday School song you posted too. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 11-May-2024
Comment from kiwisteveh
Good job at describing what makes you happy. You seem to have ticked all the boxes with regards to rhyme and number of stanzas.
Your faith in God the creator also shines through your cheerful piece.
Good luck.
Steve
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Good job at describing what makes you happy. You seem to have ticked all the boxes with regards to rhyme and number of stanzas.
Your faith in God the creator also shines through your cheerful piece.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was wonderful. Your poem beautifully celebrates the wonder of God's creation. The imagery of creatures swimming in the sea and hovering in the sky gave me a sense of awe and admiration for the diversity of life. I love your word choices. Including "God is a God of creativity". How true! He has provided us endless beauty.
What I like about this poem the most is that you share the joy and happiness that come from appreciating God's creations.
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I thought this was wonderful. Your poem beautifully celebrates the wonder of God's creation. The imagery of creatures swimming in the sea and hovering in the sky gave me a sense of awe and admiration for the diversity of life. I love your word choices. Including "God is a God of creativity". How true! He has provided us endless beauty.
What I like about this poem the most is that you share the joy and happiness that come from appreciating God's creations.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
