Comment from
Nicki Nance
Reading your story was a great way to start my day. I like th to you introduced the lady before the dream, and put a lot of detail to your dream experience.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
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Comment from
Julie Helms
What a lovely story! I like the catchiness of the date I met my fate. This is the stuff of fairytales that few ever experience.
Typo:
walked off a bus in South Korean
(Korea)
She appeared to me as if she was an angel.
(Subjunctive tense: ...as if she were an angel.)
I enjoyed your story!
Julie
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024