Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Okay, I knew something interesting was going to happen but never expected that. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. They rhyming scheme was very good and good luck with the contest.
Addressed to my dearly loved wife Janelle. (wife,)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from
patcelaw
It didn't happen to you. I would like to say that you have written a very interesting poem using your imagination. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia .
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from
Nicki Nance
This is the best story I've read all week. I love the reality of the accidental diagnoses that become blessings the older they get. My favorite line...spikes to spheres. Glad it's not your story
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
I'm so glad you liked it! It was definitely a fun write and I tried to put as much humor in it as I could while still keeping it somewhat plausible! Have a great rest of your week :)