Heartache
5-7-5 competition4 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
It's good and if they did break up cards it could easily appear on one. I say if, they made them. I am pretty sure you can buy anything these days. Perhaps a career beckons.
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It's good and if they did break up cards it could easily appear on one. I say if, they made them. I am pretty sure you can buy anything these days. Perhaps a career beckons.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from nancyjam
This is a heartbreaking 5-7-5. Amazing how 3 lines can say so much!
Lost love, no matter how long ago, brings heartache that lasts forever
in our memory. Hopefully a new love helps mend the break.
Nancy
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This is a heartbreaking 5-7-5. Amazing how 3 lines can say so much!
Lost love, no matter how long ago, brings heartache that lasts forever
in our memory. Hopefully a new love helps mend the break.
Nancy
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. The poem meets the required syllable criteria. Cupid needs to be shot down for good in my humble opinion because he sucks! lol Nicely written. Good luck in the contest,
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. The poem meets the required syllable criteria. Cupid needs to be shot down for good in my humble opinion because he sucks! lol Nicely written. Good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 09-May-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
This captures I suppose what most of us will experience at least in once in our lives. I really like the line 'a fool to cupids arrow' you only feel like a fool when things don't work as planned. I hope the arrow will fly in the right direction once again.
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This captures I suppose what most of us will experience at least in once in our lives. I really like the line 'a fool to cupids arrow' you only feel like a fool when things don't work as planned. I hope the arrow will fly in the right direction once again.
Comment Written 09-May-2024
