Child
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this! The visual is delightful and you've skilfully captured its essence with your well rhymed 1-6-. Personally, I would have preferred another word for 'fully' maybe 'sweetly.' But it's an excellent entry and wins my vote! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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I like this! The visual is delightful and you've skilfully captured its essence with your well rhymed 1-6-. Personally, I would have preferred another word for 'fully' maybe 'sweetly.' But it's an excellent entry and wins my vote! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thank you dear Debbie <3
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine words for our smiling children here and nurturing them is in the care of the adult as children can easily be scarred by life, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Fine words for our smiling children here and nurturing them is in the care of the adult as children can easily be scarred by life, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you dear Dolly <3
Comment from Nicki Nance
Your words are a perfect fit to the babe in the graphic. You captured that age when every day tells them a thousand secrets. No wonder they are beguiled and beguiling.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Your words are a perfect fit to the babe in the graphic. You captured that age when every day tells them a thousand secrets. No wonder they are beguiled and beguiling.
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you dear nicki <3