Wild Weather
A stormy spring evening9 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. It seems much of the US has been hit with tornado warnings lately. This is an excellent presentation. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. It seems much of the US has been hit with tornado warnings lately. This is an excellent presentation. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. The poem fits the required criteria. The artwork adds to the presentation. The poem describes a scary tornado hitting land. Nothing scares me worse than that. I would take any other kind of storm over a tornado. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. The poem fits the required criteria. The artwork adds to the presentation. The poem describes a scary tornado hitting land. Nothing scares me worse than that. I would take any other kind of storm over a tornado. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think I would be quite frightened if I heard a tornado siren and here I in your poem I could here the warnings of bad weather, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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I think I would be quite frightened if I heard a tornado siren and here I in your poem I could here the warnings of bad weather, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
We don't don't get a lot of wild weather where we live, but I've experienced enough to know that battening the hatches down is a wise thing to do. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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We don't don't get a lot of wild weather where we live, but I've experienced enough to know that battening the hatches down is a wise thing to do. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
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Welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Wild Weather, has the proper formatting and send the sounds of alliteration through the work and whips them to the readers like tempest tossed tidbits.
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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This 5-7-5, Wild Weather, has the proper formatting and send the sounds of alliteration through the work and whips them to the readers like tempest tossed tidbits.
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thanks, Bill, your review could be a poem itself. Much appreciated!
Comment from Nicki Nance
I have to say that the graphic put me right there. Your 575 is a perfect fit. You told the whole story with nineteen words and an image. Starting with a clever alliteration is the icing on the cake.
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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I have to say that the graphic put me right there. Your 575 is a perfect fit. You told the whole story with nineteen words and an image. Starting with a clever alliteration is the icing on the cake.
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thank you so much for your review, appreciated!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a well written 575 and I enjoyed reading it. It is very good advice, especially when you're dealing with tornadoes. I am just thankful that I've never experienced a tornado nor do I ever wish to. Pat.
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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This is a well written 575 and I enjoyed reading it. It is very good advice, especially when you're dealing with tornadoes. I am just thankful that I've never experienced a tornado nor do I ever wish to. Pat.
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Pat!
Comment from RodG
Those folks in Oklahoma know exactly what you're talking about in this short poem: the wild weather approaching, the screaming sirens, and the need to swiftly seek shelter before you're blown away. All nicely conveyed in but 17 syllables.
Rod
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Those folks in Oklahoma know exactly what you're talking about in this short poem: the wild weather approaching, the screaming sirens, and the need to swiftly seek shelter before you're blown away. All nicely conveyed in but 17 syllables.
Rod
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Yes, I had to wake everyone to be prepared last night, sirens were sounding in the town just south of us & it was headed our way. We were fortunate to be located between two bad areas & just had downpour, wind & a little hail Thanks for your review!
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My pleasure. Glad you were missed.
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is a great use of alliteration in your powerful poem. I have never had to worry about tornadoes but this gives a good idea of the experience in a few words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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This is a great use of alliteration in your powerful poem. I have never had to worry about tornadoes but this gives a good idea of the experience in a few words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Thanks so much!