Lair Of The Seductress
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Cravings"Book Four Wolf Bend Series
10 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. The only thing I didn't like was all the curse words closer to the front. I worked for our local Police Dept. for many years and that was one thing I didn't like about working there. Other than that a really great chapter my friend. Teri
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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This is a very interesting and well written chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. The only thing I didn't like was all the curse words closer to the front. I worked for our local Police Dept. for many years and that was one thing I didn't like about working there. Other than that a really great chapter my friend. Teri
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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I was an LEO for 30 years and we were professional cursers. Ha! Tried for accuracy. Thank you for the review and Fanning!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, I'd say it might be hard to get anything done while "sitting on someone's hands." Well, I mean, the settee, hands held out of commission is useless. Or at least you have to hope they don't have superpowers. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Yes, I'd say it might be hard to get anything done while "sitting on someone's hands." Well, I mean, the settee, hands held out of commission is useless. Or at least you have to hope they don't have superpowers. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Ha! Thanks for the insight!!!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
A life-sized foreshadowing: "What Greg finds awakens him to the realization that more bad things are coming for him and his little town." this will get the reader more involved: "Is this woman really that good? To leave absolutely nothing behind on her clothes or in her hideout. Is she a damn ghost?" David looked perturbed." the reader leans forward:
""Yes, it's great that we've discovered what motivates our killer, but how do we use it to capture her?" Harkins rubbed his hands together." this is excellent I'm in for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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A life-sized foreshadowing: "What Greg finds awakens him to the realization that more bad things are coming for him and his little town." this will get the reader more involved: "Is this woman really that good? To leave absolutely nothing behind on her clothes or in her hideout. Is she a damn ghost?" David looked perturbed." the reader leans forward:
""Yes, it's great that we've discovered what motivates our killer, but how do we use it to capture her?" Harkins rubbed his hands together." this is excellent I'm in for the next chapter.
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thanks, Liz. This has been an interesting one!
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You did a good job
Comment from barbara.wilkey
And they don't have a roving eye. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. Greg is at the top of his game right now. I'm sure something will happen that will cause him to struggle. Love the story.
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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And they don't have a roving eye. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. Greg is at the top of his game right now. I'm sure something will happen that will cause him to struggle. Love the story.
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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You think? Hmmm. Get ready for the roller coaster ride. It starts . . .next chapter!
Thank you for supporting me, Barbara. You are one of the reasons I didn't jump off the site.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm a bit confused here because she likes the idea of cheaters but she doesn't always carry out the killing. Does the concept build up and feed upon her lust for later? The problem with her is that she's so ethereal that no evidence is left behind and that's going to be a challenge. Also Greg is now going to put all his investigating officers in the firing line.This gets more and more dangerous and needs a breakthrough fast! Well done, Greg, on another imaginative and intriguing chapter with still no resolution in sight. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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I'm a bit confused here because she likes the idea of cheaters but she doesn't always carry out the killing. Does the concept build up and feed upon her lust for later? The problem with her is that she's so ethereal that no evidence is left behind and that's going to be a challenge. Also Greg is now going to put all his investigating officers in the firing line.This gets more and more dangerous and needs a breakthrough fast! Well done, Greg, on another imaginative and intriguing chapter with still no resolution in sight. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Confused? So, I have you right where I want you!
Read on, my friend.
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Your imagination knows no bounds!! I should know this by now.
Comment from royowen
Lilith is a bit of a mystery, she doesn't kill everyone, it seems like she almost has a conscience, but how can that be? She's hunting men to kill them, but not all. You're weaving an intricate plot Douglas, have you got it figured? Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Lilith is a bit of a mystery, she doesn't kill everyone, it seems like she almost has a conscience, but how can that be? She's hunting men to kill them, but not all. You're weaving an intricate plot Douglas, have you got it figured? Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Oh yes, Roy. I have it nailed down solid. Next chapter the roller coaster ride begins! Thank you for the awesome rating!
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Most welcome
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was another great addition to your book. Douglas, it was well written rich and seen and imagery
It also, read well, flowed well with no Grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing this chapter and have a wonderful evening.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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This chapter was another great addition to your book. Douglas, it was well written rich and seen and imagery
It also, read well, flowed well with no Grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing this chapter and have a wonderful evening.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thank you for the awesome review, my friend!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I seem to
Know
That at the end
The
Good guys always win but what if... this
Story ends completely differently like the FBI skipper is driving a
Can and she seduces him
Until s p l a t! And
Finally the Chief's
Missing wife
Decapitates the witch ð?«£ð?«
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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I seem to
Know
That at the end
The
Good guys always win but what if... this
Story ends completely differently like the FBI skipper is driving a
Can and she seduces him
Until s p l a t! And
Finally the Chief's
Missing wife
Decapitates the witch ð?«£ð?«
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Stop reading my mind Tom! It?s dark and there are cobwebs in there.
Comment from Julie Helms
So why the guilt? Is it like a demonic thing that the emotion feeds her and makes her more powerful? I can hardly believe she feels like she's doing a service to society by offing the cheaters. Just talking to myself here.
I couldn't find a single thing to be corrected. I'm a little...bereft.
Lol! Excellent chapter, Douglas.
Julie
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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So why the guilt? Is it like a demonic thing that the emotion feeds her and makes her more powerful? I can hardly believe she feels like she's doing a service to society by offing the cheaters. Just talking to myself here.
I couldn't find a single thing to be corrected. I'm a little...bereft.
Lol! Excellent chapter, Douglas.
Julie
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Goodness, some of you are figuring this Lilith out. Great review!
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
All rightee, then. We have a plan. Yay!
Nice writing.
Now if he can only figure out how to kill her if they manage to capture her.
But what about the Stoggers??????????? (smiley face here)
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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All rightee, then. We have a plan. Yay!
Nice writing.
Now if he can only figure out how to kill her if they manage to capture her.
But what about the Stoggers??????????? (smiley face here)
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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The killing of the Stoggers will make a lot of sense . . . soon.
Great review. The next chapter is a doozie!
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