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Comment from GWHARGIS
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I know the possibility of being struck by a vehicle is terrible but I swear I busted out laughing when I read the last line. Very comical and the picture was so serious as was the first part. Then you threw in the comedic line. Great fun to read. Gretchen

 Comment Written 07-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    hehe I am glad it made you laugh, that was my intention

    Thank you very much,

    gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Only God knows what our future holds, and He rarely shares that with us. When He does, we often, because of free well, choose not to listen. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 07-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Funny idea Gypsy!

Did not see the ending coming LOL.

In my lifetime, I had one palm reading. The things told me were so generic that they could apply to anyone. And no, the winning lottery numbers were not given. LOL

Mark

 Comment Written 07-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    LoL I had my palm read a few times, once in Spain by a true Gypsy. It was creepy. Another time, here in California, a Gypsy told me I would meet many men but the relationships would not go far.... 4 marriages and divorces proved her right lol. I gave up on men.

    Thank you very much, Mark.

    Gypsy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Come on, that is funny. I don't care who you are. The picture and the photo go well together. The move has me all hurty. The packing and stress. I am looking forward to the move but it is still stress and work.
I am happy anyhoo. Karen

 Comment Written 07-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    Here is a joke to brighten your day....

    "A good friend helps you move, a best friend helps you hide the dead bodies" lol

    Thank you very much, Karen.

    Gypsy

    Gypsy
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 07-May-2024
    I agree with that! :-)
Comment from lyenochka
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I like your humor here. I don't know about fortune tellers but I wish those people who spread conspiracies would be forced to admit and confess those conspiracies so that people won't be deceived.

 Comment Written 07-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    Yes, most fortune tellers are deceiving.

    Thank you, big sister

    Love

    Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
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That is sad, they never really do. The words are strong and tell the whole story in such little words.
Thank you for sharing.
Have a great evening.
RJ


 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    Thank you very much,
    RJ, have a wonderful night too.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by RJ Heritage on 07-May-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from robyn corum
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M,

Highly amusing. It is always interesting to see exactly when these wonderful powers are available and when they head into blackout mode.

Fortunately, there is always a super explanation ready to hand.

So creative! Btw, I encouraged someone today to come find you. She seems to be drawn to Japanese writing. Fingers crossed she may learn from you!

Thank you!

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Thank you very much, Robyn ... I appreciate it.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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Heh heh, how amazing that a fortune teller can't work their own future and yet can work out everyone else's future, I love your sense of humour Gypsy, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Haha. Thank you, Roy. I'm happy it made you smile.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 06-May-2024
    Well done
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Okay, now that is funny. Lots of these fortune tellers are con artists.

We arrested one who was telling grieving widows to bury money at their husbands' graves and then she was going and digging up the money. Awful!

Funny read. Thank you for the light moment.
D

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Thank you very much, Douglas, I'm happy it made you smile.

    I hate people who take advantage of the elderly.

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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lol probably shouldn't have laughed at this... but i did -- a great satori!! so didn't see that coming lol

cool katauta with good imagery, smooth flow, and an excellent twist

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    LoL I'm glad it made you giggle.

    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review, Shelley.

    Gypsy hugs