Repetitive Sedative
Going under for surgery.7 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I wish I knew what this was about, it seems to be about being in a hospital bed, being sedated. But thank you for writing this, it was a challenge dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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I wish I knew what this was about, it seems to be about being in a hospital bed, being sedated. But thank you for writing this, it was a challenge dear friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting poem you have penned about going under for surgery. I have experienced that in my life. When I came to I was shocked i was in recovery like you said. Good job! Teri
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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This is a very interesting poem you have penned about going under for surgery. I have experienced that in my life. When I came to I was shocked i was in recovery like you said. Good job! Teri
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Comment from Mymy Khan
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and the rhythm which follows the state of mind of the writer. The poem creates anticipation in the reader. The repetition creates impact, well done.
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and the rhythm which follows the state of mind of the writer. The poem creates anticipation in the reader. The repetition creates impact, well done.
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I could relate to this. I had emergency operation to have my child and as they lowered the sedative over my face I asked if they had done this before as if I were interviewing in the middle of an emergency. I has trouble waking out of the anesthesia and I thought I was in Mexico because I saw a sign over a door entrance. I kept thinking it was Spanish although I'm an American and speak English. I reason en tran ce.
Sp, your poem truly illustrated what I've known.
Well done
Alex
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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I could relate to this. I had emergency operation to have my child and as they lowered the sedative over my face I asked if they had done this before as if I were interviewing in the middle of an emergency. I has trouble waking out of the anesthesia and I thought I was in Mexico because I saw a sign over a door entrance. I kept thinking it was Spanish although I'm an American and speak English. I reason en tran ce.
Sp, your poem truly illustrated what I've known.
Well done
Alex
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are sedated by drugs to spot us from being traumatised by surgical procedures and when we are in recovery we can rest, a poignant write John, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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We are sedated by drugs to spot us from being traumatised by surgical procedures and when we are in recovery we can rest, a poignant write John, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Comment from Julie Helms
This is such a creative description of a person's perceptions through each stage of a surgical procedure. Your repetition makes for a nice echo in a mind that is no longer running on all cylinders!
Personally, when I got the pre-anesthetic sedative, I started saying a lot of stupid stuff. Nothing that could remotely qualify as poetic.
Nicely done and really enjoyable to read!
Julie
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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This is such a creative description of a person's perceptions through each stage of a surgical procedure. Your repetition makes for a nice echo in a mind that is no longer running on all cylinders!
Personally, when I got the pre-anesthetic sedative, I started saying a lot of stupid stuff. Nothing that could remotely qualify as poetic.
Nicely done and really enjoyable to read!
Julie
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Comment from Nicki.B
Your poem made me laugh thinking back of how I felt I'm the operating table myself. I really like the flow through pre , during and post sedative. And the repetitive wording like echoes of word drifting off to the distance just how your mind does when they put you under. Well done, very enjoyable
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Your poem made me laugh thinking back of how I felt I'm the operating table myself. I really like the flow through pre , during and post sedative. And the repetitive wording like echoes of word drifting off to the distance just how your mind does when they put you under. Well done, very enjoyable
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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