Lair Of The Seductress
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Well, that was unexpected I must say. She left clothes behind. Quite a wrinkle in spirit/ reality flux. I do enjoy your brainy brain. I have gotten so behind, but I will catch up eventually. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Well, that was unexpected I must say. She left clothes behind. Quite a wrinkle in spirit/ reality flux. I do enjoy your brainy brain. I have gotten so behind, but I will catch up eventually. :-)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I?ve have been moving along at a snail?s pace.
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Whiled I was arranging the move and handling details and packing I wasn't reading silly boy! Trix is for kids. :-)
Comment from royowen
How interesting Lilith nearly tempted an elderly man, no really old, but he had always been faithful to his wife, so it seems like Lilith cannot take the life of a faithful man. Now that's a revelation, beautifully written Douglas, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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How interesting Lilith nearly tempted an elderly man, no really old, but he had always been faithful to his wife, so it seems like Lilith cannot take the life of a faithful man. Now that's a revelation, beautifully written Douglas, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Roy. Very kind.
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You?re amazing Douglas
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Creepy. creepy! I like the way this is going, Doug! She's real enigma isn't she? Now we've got the supernatural element in your story, this gets more and more mysterious. She's drawn to older men with wives as though she can only exact her revenge on younger men, less committed. Excellent dialogue and thought processes and definitely setting Greg on a new track of investigation. Well done, Doug! Another goodie! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Creepy. creepy! I like the way this is going, Doug! She's real enigma isn't she? Now we've got the supernatural element in your story, this gets more and more mysterious. She's drawn to older men with wives as though she can only exact her revenge on younger men, less committed. Excellent dialogue and thought processes and definitely setting Greg on a new track of investigation. Well done, Doug! Another goodie! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We are getting more information on Lilith. I'm sitting here telling Greg to be careful, but I know he won't so why am I talking to him? Besides he's not real. Oh well, I'm still giving him a lecture. Thank you for sharing. Love the story.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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We are getting more information on Lilith. I'm sitting here telling Greg to be careful, but I know he won't so why am I talking to him? Besides he's not real. Oh well, I'm still giving him a lecture. Thank you for sharing. Love the story.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, my friend. You are too kind.
Comment from Julie Helms
Hmmm...I don't see Lilith accidentally leaving her clothes behind. It feels like bait.
This continues to be an interesting combo of paranormal and crime drama. The black blade is a nice addition. Probably not found in the Official Police Handbook!
I cant wait to go tell my friend, Lisa Smith, that she features in a story, and as a sexy murdering goddess roaming junk yards butt naked!
A totally engaging chapter.
Julie
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Hmmm...I don't see Lilith accidentally leaving her clothes behind. It feels like bait.
This continues to be an interesting combo of paranormal and crime drama. The black blade is a nice addition. Probably not found in the Official Police Handbook!
I cant wait to go tell my friend, Lisa Smith, that she features in a story, and as a sexy murdering goddess roaming junk yards butt naked!
A totally engaging chapter.
Julie
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you Julie. The blade came from the last book, Hag?s Hollow. The witch used it.
Appreciate you.
D
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This may be my favorite chapter here to date. Mesmerizingly humorous. I would have ended it as Haruki did but not envisioning Akani, of course, but my wife. In addition, at seventy-six the plumbing ain't what it once was so her efforts likely would not have prevailed.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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This may be my favorite chapter here to date. Mesmerizingly humorous. I would have ended it as Haruki did but not envisioning Akani, of course, but my wife. In addition, at seventy-six the plumbing ain't what it once was so her efforts likely would not have prevailed.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Tom. I myself enjoyed this one.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well, that's new.
This is another well-written chapter. Good work.
Greg needs to hurry and find Lillith, and stick that sword into her heart.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Well, that's new.
This is another well-written chapter. Good work.
Greg needs to hurry and find Lillith, and stick that sword into her heart.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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We shall see if it plays out that way. Have a feeling it is about to go sideways real fast.
