Reviews from

Writer's Something

a 5-7-5

9 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Exactly. And that also assumes one has something to say. Lol. But sometimes one seems to run totally out of ideas, and even the desire to write. Well done. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-May-2024


reply by the author on 03-May-2024
    Thank you, Wendy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Haha! Great! Excellent depiction of the theme in your amusing, well-presented post. Even the hand looks tired and forgetful! Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 03-May-2024


reply by the author on 03-May-2024
    Thank you, Debbie.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Once we are interrupted, our thoughts fail to flow and we forget very easily what our muse created for us. It is best to write down our thoughts straight away before they disappear forever, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    So true.
Comment from gansach
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Often when I try to be inspired, it just won't happen. It's when my mind is concentrating on something else, that inspiration strikes. Your 5-7-5 poem is a good example of that. You have the syllable count correctly and the photo is a good illustration to the poem. Good job!

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Thank you, G
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I believe you are stumbling over writer's block and it has you stuttering. Very clever 5- 7- 5 verse and a fun response to the prompt. Keep them coming.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Thank you, Ginda
Comment from LJbutterfly
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I'm sure many writers can relate to the sentiments expressed in your poem. We often feel we have nothing of value to say. We often struggle with the words to adequately express what we DO have to say. And then, as your poem states, "What was I saying?" I enjoyed the humor and reality of your work. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Thank you, LJ
Comment from Heartstorm
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Your poem made me smile! This is a very relatable experience! Especially in the nature of speaking, or trying to gather thought! Great use of words for the 5-7-5! Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Thank you, H
Comment from Douglas Goff
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Cute. This is well presented and a unique idea.

I knew there were goi g to be some really good ones. Creative prompts lead to creative entries. Yours is no exception.

Good luck!
D

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Thank you, Douglas
Comment from Shanbreen
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Wonderful. What beautiful way of portraying writer's block. Although, the way you display it (forgetting what you were talking about) can be seen by some as being more than a writer's block --- loss of memory, perhaps? I should know. It happens to me a lot as I get older. Thanks for sharing and best of luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Thank you, Shanbreen.