Comment from
Douglas Goff
Nicely done. Good descriptions of the present.
There are a few syntax error symbol issues. These usually occurred when you cut and paste. You may need to re-type into Fanstory.
These occur in title and the last sentence.
Good story.
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Comment Written 01-May-2024
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Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well done. I love how you letter shared how things have changed over the year. And how they have not! The sincerity and gratitude expressed by the descendant for the values passed down through generations was deeply touching.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024