Comment from hullabaloo22

Excellent

Great rhythm and the rhyming is superb. You did an excellent job of describing the feeling of being betrayed and maybe planning revenge.
Wonderful image to go with the poem.
Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024

---

reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Many thanks

Comment from John Pittman

Excellent

I like the use of words and the rhythm of your poem. You have a well thought out beginning, middle, and end. This allows me dive into the meaning more.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

---

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024

Thank you, John. Your assessment in this review has been extremely helpoful.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I sounds like this person is a master manipulator and having a plan to deceive someone is dishonest and treacherous, I enjoyed your betrayal entry for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

---

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024

The poem is based on two people I know, embellished just a little. Thank you for your kind words, Dolly xx

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

You have described betrayal wonderfully in these words, and yes, it usually comes back to those who try to deliver it, an excellent read, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024

---

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024

Thank you Kahpot. Sadly, it is one of life's experiences.