Eclipsed Stars
A poem exploring the emotional landscape of loss and longing3 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
The pain of loss can be so very hard to bear, you have penned this feeling
(though sad) very beautifully, from blue to dark, a terrible change, very well written****kahpot
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The pain of loss can be so very hard to bear, you have penned this feeling
(though sad) very beautifully, from blue to dark, a terrible change, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 04-May-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The pain of losing someone does indeed darken our world for a while until we let ourselves see and feel the sun again, I could identify with your words here, love Dolly x
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The pain of losing someone does indeed darken our world for a while until we let ourselves see and feel the sun again, I could identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a powerful poem. Your words convey a sense of loss and longing. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture of the emotional turmoil that accompanies the end of a relationship. The imagery of the rising and setting sun was great. I saw that as a metaphor for the passage of time and the cycle of grief. Great job!
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I thought this was a powerful poem. Your words convey a sense of loss and longing. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture of the emotional turmoil that accompanies the end of a relationship. The imagery of the rising and setting sun was great. I saw that as a metaphor for the passage of time and the cycle of grief. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
