2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
It took me a couple of beats to get it. Not used to seeing sheep in a field LOL
Nicely constructed haiku
A question? Is sheep a kigo for summer?
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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It took me a couple of beats to get it. Not used to seeing sheep in a field LOL
Nicely constructed haiku
A question? Is sheep a kigo for summer?
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you, Julia. It's a summer haiku when the grass is juicy and green. LoL I guess it can be any warm season.
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Ok gotcha 🤗
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nicely written, haiku. I love these little poems. I have read them all, but I do not have time to review them all. I am moving on the 18th of May to be closer to my sisters. They will help me with things. And they want game night! What fun. We are all cutthroat. We win fairly equally. I have missed them. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Nicely written, haiku. I love these little poems. I have read them all, but I do not have time to review them all. I am moving on the 18th of May to be closer to my sisters. They will help me with things. And they want game night! What fun. We are all cutthroat. We win fairly equally. I have missed them. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you very, Karen.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This imagery in this was phenomenal. I have watched videos of border collies herding sheep and it does look like that. Then they merge together and become one big dot that morphs and separates to become polka dots again. Wonderfully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This imagery in this was phenomenal. I have watched videos of border collies herding sheep and it does look like that. Then they merge together and become one big dot that morphs and separates to become polka dots again. Wonderfully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's true from a high hilltop the sheep would look like polka dots. I wonder if from Heaven we look like polka dots. Jesus is the Good Shephard. I doubt it since He knows everything about us. This is another beautifully written poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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It's true from a high hilltop the sheep would look like polka dots. I wonder if from Heaven we look like polka dots. Jesus is the Good Shephard. I doubt it since He knows everything about us. This is another beautifully written poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from lyenochka
I guess the sheep are polka-dotting the grassy fields? But on our lawns these days, it's the dandelions which are dotting the grass and there's no hope in winning the war.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I guess the sheep are polka-dotting the grassy fields? But on our lawns these days, it's the dandelions which are dotting the grass and there's no hope in winning the war.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for big sister. I like dandelions but it is a weed. Young and old make wishes.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
polka dot <-- 2 words
i like the shepherd/sheep alliteration
and the polka dotted grass was a great satori!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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polka dot <-- 2 words
i like the shepherd/sheep alliteration
and the polka dotted grass was a great satori!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I fixed it.
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I really enjoyed this Haiku. The phrase polkadot grass field really sets the imagery in my mind and is a perfect description of what a large herd of sheep would look like on a field from a distance away. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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I really enjoyed this Haiku. The phrase polkadot grass field really sets the imagery in my mind and is a perfect description of what a large herd of sheep would look like on a field from a distance away. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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