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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from Mark Jackson
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The dialogue is laced with humor and wit, contributing to the light-hearted tone of the scene. However, beneath the surface, there are hints of tension and intrigue, particularly with the introduction of the Radical Female Character and her cryptic interaction with Pons. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Always need an excentric within the demented.
Comment from judiverse
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We lost our last video store here in Terre Haute a few years ago. I believe one Blockbuster is still remaining. On the west coast, I believe. Slides are so out of the picture. I have some old slides my husband and I took, and I'm throwing them out. It's all Power Point now. I'm glad Ned and Pons still have their respective girlfriends. This does seem the time for a poem from AA is in order. judi

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    The boys have a great shot at success here.
Comment from Ulla
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Hahaha, I loved it as always. Yes, that is certainly a person you should trust, especially with the name Mentirosa!! Wonderful. Now I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
Bill, I've meant to ask. How is your wife?

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Ulla. My wife is recovering and recovering from recovering. She is pending installation of a device, Watchman, to eliminate blood thinners she needs to protect her bypass and stents.
    Those blood thinners are bad for her brain bleed.
    She is having two surgeries to make her dialysis port permanent.
    She has been scheduled for a hysterectomy for two years now, and she is just waiting to be well enough for it.
reply by Ulla on 29-Apr-2024
    I am so sorry, Bill. I can see you're both facing a tough time. Thanks so much for updating me. My thoughts are with you. Ulla:)))
Comment from lyenochka
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Looks like the campaign aides have been inspired by AA's muse and personified her lines. I hope they can get RFC outta there as she seems like someone who could be dangerous!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Always need the dark antagonist.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Oh thank you for sharing with us the ongoing saga of the world of politics. There are so many ups and downs ins and outs in the political arena. There are so many hangers on and those that come for the fame and glory. But I like the fact that you can sense that a poem is coming on!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Doc
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome Bill!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome Bill!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome Bill!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome Bill!
Comment from royowen
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What an incredible bunch of characters only you could dream up Bill, you are brilliant at these scripts, writing scripts is a rare gift, not many do it, an excellent job again. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Roy
reply by royowen on 28-Apr-2024
    Welcome Bill
Comment from nomi338
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Even though I no longer involve myself with politics, I would eagerly watch a campaign involving Ned and Pons. May the best cousin win. The country cannot be in any worse hands no matter who wins or loses.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Really? Ned as the Pred?
reply by nomi338 on 28-Apr-2024
    Fer sure.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Sometimes I have a bit of difficulty figuring what is going on with these characters, but no more so than what is going on with the REAL characters. I can't believe CNN and I can't believe FOX, so I watch old movies.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Try All the President's Men. : )
reply by jim vecchio on 28-Apr-2024
    Great movie! Please forgive if I seem long in replying. Our wifi is going out here and I keep getting disconnected.