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Love Gone Sour

Short and hardly sweet...

4 total reviews 
Comment from Douglas Goff
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It has, but in a different context.

Anyways this is short sweet and succinct.

There is some serious talent telling a story and relaying a feeling in just six simple words. And all are one syllable.

Well-done
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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Thank you so very much for your review. It means a lot to me and I thank you very much. Regards GK
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Betrayal Poetry contest. Who knew you could write a complete relationship breakdown from start to finish in just six syllables? Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Thank you very much, Marilyn. I appreciate your consideration and your kind words. Regards GK
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I was just trying to figure out who's he and she and all that stuff. This hasn't quite happened to me, but I I've seen it. This is well written very plainly and sometimes that is all that is needed to convey a message. Good work.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Alex, trust me on this: It is better that you never know as the last line of a rather celebrated horror cult classic had said it best- The Curse of the Demon with Dana Andrews That floppy hat gives you a rather winning lokk. Regards GK
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This put a smile on my face! I think that's pretty much descibes the start of any fight that starts with a woman yelling at a man. Very nicely done. You say a lot with just a few words. So creative!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-May-2024
    Michael, once again, thank you. More smiles and less glum dank apprehensive faces in this world. Regards GK