Love Gone Sour
Short and hardly sweet...4 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
It has, but in a different context.
Anyways this is short sweet and succinct.
There is some serious talent telling a story and relaying a feeling in just six simple words. And all are one syllable.
Well-done
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reply by the author on 01-May-2024
It has, but in a different context.
Anyways this is short sweet and succinct.
There is some serious talent telling a story and relaying a feeling in just six simple words. And all are one syllable.
Well-done
D
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you so very much for your review. It means a lot to me and I thank you very much. Regards GK
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Betrayal Poetry contest. Who knew you could write a complete relationship breakdown from start to finish in just six syllables? Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
An excellent entry for the Betrayal Poetry contest. Who knew you could write a complete relationship breakdown from start to finish in just six syllables? Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn. I appreciate your consideration and your kind words. Regards GK
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I was just trying to figure out who's he and she and all that stuff. This hasn't quite happened to me, but I I've seen it. This is well written very plainly and sometimes that is all that is needed to convey a message. Good work.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
I was just trying to figure out who's he and she and all that stuff. This hasn't quite happened to me, but I I've seen it. This is well written very plainly and sometimes that is all that is needed to convey a message. Good work.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Alex, trust me on this: It is better that you never know as the last line of a rather celebrated horror cult classic had said it best- The Curse of the Demon with Dana Andrews That floppy hat gives you a rather winning lokk. Regards GK
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This put a smile on my face! I think that's pretty much descibes the start of any fight that starts with a woman yelling at a man. Very nicely done. You say a lot with just a few words. So creative!
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
This put a smile on my face! I think that's pretty much descibes the start of any fight that starts with a woman yelling at a man. Very nicely done. You say a lot with just a few words. So creative!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Michael, once again, thank you. More smiles and less glum dank apprehensive faces in this world. Regards GK