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Mischief

Boys have fun while Mom tended her garden.

5 total reviews 
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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This was really cute! I had a slight bit of trouble with the flow, but the message came through loud and clear, anyway. Also, an adorable picture. Good luck!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thanks for the read and feedback. I will check with the flow problem.
Comment from Teri7
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This is just too cute! We have twin sons and when they were that age they got into a lot of messes. You used great descriptive words and an adorable picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thanks for the read and the encouraging review. Twins are a challenge, but it sounds like you enjoy them. Have a great life.
Comment from hullabaloo22
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What a great memory to share! I bet 'Mom' can laugh about this now too. This was very well written and enjoyable to read.
I wish you the best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Unfortunately, Mom has long since gone. But, you are right; she did laugh when we would retell the story. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Julie Helms
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This is really cute! It reminded me of a time when I was maybe 5 or 6 when a friend and I decided to decorate each other's white turtlenecks with magic marker. We stood in front of her mother vehemently denying that we had done it (still wearing the evidence), but her older sister ratted us out.
This is a great entry for a messy contest!
Julie

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    Yeah, I bet an older sister can be a pain. I had a younger one and she loved to tattle. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from nancyjam
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This is a great entry for the contest. Little boys have so much fun making messes and your well written poem gives such fine examples.
Nicely rhymed quatrains with great imagery.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback.