Forever
The kind of love that lasts a lifetime.2 total reviews
Comment from isabelteeth
Pretty idea! definitely relatable. something i tend to look for in a poem is novelty and i think even with the constraints of format there is always something new to say about love. i feel like this doesn't elaborate enough.
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Pretty idea! definitely relatable. something i tend to look for in a poem is novelty and i think even with the constraints of format there is always something new to say about love. i feel like this doesn't elaborate enough.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
Comment from jessizero
To be honest, I'm not sure I believe in forever love anymore, but you did a lovely job bringing it to life in this poem. You also got the internal and ending rhymes right for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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To be honest, I'm not sure I believe in forever love anymore, but you did a lovely job bringing it to life in this poem. You also got the internal and ending rhymes right for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
