Hard Work
Searching for medical answers requires repeated trials.2 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
I sure hope in reality they do come up with a drug to do just that. I didn't see anything that needed to be corrected. I followed the story along easily. Nothing was a mystery. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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I sure hope in reality they do come up with a drug to do just that. I didn't see anything that needed to be corrected. I followed the story along easily. Nothing was a mystery. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Hope you enjoyed the story with a cupa.
Comment from Brett Juliet
Hi! So, I gave four stars for the concept that you have come up with, the idea that the dementia itself would skew the results. I think if you took this and ran with it you could develop it into a very interesting short story, it has lots of potential for me the main thing is fleshing out the characters and show through them those various stages and symptoms of dementia. Good luck with contest!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hi! So, I gave four stars for the concept that you have come up with, the idea that the dementia itself would skew the results. I think if you took this and ran with it you could develop it into a very interesting short story, it has lots of potential for me the main thing is fleshing out the characters and show through them those various stages and symptoms of dementia. Good luck with contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the suggestions. I will consider them carefully when I rewrite.
