Built for two
One of our great moments.4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Romance does show up in so many different ways that people don't think about. Riding a bicycle built for two, with the right people can be very romantic. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
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Romance does show up in so many different ways that people don't think about. Riding a bicycle built for two, with the right people can be very romantic. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a romantic poem that probably will impress your wife, if it hasn't already. I only have one spelling correction to suggest:
Peddling together
During the ride,
I think you mean Pedaling together
Unless you happened to be selling something while riding the bicycle.
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This is a romantic poem that probably will impress your wife, if it hasn't already. I only have one spelling correction to suggest:
Peddling together
During the ride,
I think you mean Pedaling together
Unless you happened to be selling something while riding the bicycle.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your romantic poem showing how much you love your wife and what she means to you. The bicycle built for two theme works so well.
Great rhyme and meter. So sweet.
Nancy
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I enjoyed reading your romantic poem showing how much you love your wife and what she means to you. The bicycle built for two theme works so well.
Great rhyme and meter. So sweet.
Nancy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
Comment from BethShelby
I love your poem. I can imagine that was fun riding with someone you love. I've never even see those kind of bicycles. I 'm glad you are staying with FanStory for hopefully a long time.
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I love your poem. I can imagine that was fun riding with someone you love. I've never even see those kind of bicycles. I 'm glad you are staying with FanStory for hopefully a long time.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
