I Choose Rainbows
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Death Now, is too short to have so many problems. The thought has merit, of course, because death visits us all.
My problems are all the capitals, even mid-sentence.
Your ending seems to be missing a word to finish the thought...
Where the realities of life (are) incomprehensible.
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This poem, Death Now, is too short to have so many problems. The thought has merit, of course, because death visits us all.
My problems are all the capitals, even mid-sentence.
Your ending seems to be missing a word to finish the thought...
Where the realities of life (are) incomprehensible.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
I like this, that is my sort of thing I think I am a fan. I like the idea of the circuit of time and it seems to be flickering on and off, incomprehensible.
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I like this, that is my sort of thing I think I am a fan. I like the idea of the circuit of time and it seems to be flickering on and off, incomprehensible.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024